Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Oru pazham kadha

Ithu nadanna kadhayano ennu chodhi chal njan parayum ella kdhakallum nadanathua thaneya ennu.
Enno evidayo nadanna sambhavangal annu pine kadhayayi namal kelkunathu, Inni athalla ennanu nigal parayunnathu enkil njan parayum poi pani nokan.

Njan oru kadha karan onnum alla. Athu kondu thane oru mikhacha kadhayonum enil ninu pretheeshikyaruthu.
Enik thonunna chilla karyangal njan parayam, Ningalk samayamundel vayikuka allel poi pani nok.

Enik annu 4 vayasu, Nalle ente chittede kallyanama... Enik randu chitta marundu Eswari chitta, Mani chitta...
Ithil Mani chittayude kallyannama nalle...
Entha kallyanam ennu chodichal ennik ariyilla... Arodenkhilum chodikanulla dhyryamilla...
Chodicha parayum Cheriya vayil valliaya varthamanum parayanda...
Paranadenkhil venda... njan chodikyanum poilla...
Innu veedu niraye aalukalla... Arokayo vannittundu... Oru padu per , Njan allua kallude enna medukan thudangi... Irunnu enni... Pinne nadannu enni...Pinne otta mai..

Aa thirakilloode engottokkayo odi...

Avasanam Ammooma yude mumbil chennu veeenu...
Sakarathinu vere vallathum venno... Allu kallude mumbil vachu kanakinnu kitti...
Kettapathi kelkathapathi njan ente vaa thurakan thudanji. Karachil pakuthiyayapole njan enthina karayune ennu thane marannu...Ennittum karachil nirthiyilla athu athite vazhik nadakunundu.

Idak onnu nirthum arenkilum nokunundo illa enkil kurachu netratheku visramam, Arenkilum samadhanipikyan vannal veendum thhudangum.

Oduvil Ammooma vannu mumbil ninnu. Karachil athinte uchasthayiyil ethi, "Enthina nee karayunne?". Athu vare enikyum ariyathathu athuthana enthina njan karanje?

Njan chuttum noki... Ella varum ene thana nokunne... Oru karanam athyavasyam...
Amma... Amme kannanam. Ente Amma Ammoomede moonu penmakalil onnamathethu. Ewasri chitta randamathu, Mani chitta moonamathu.

Amma kallyanna thirakilla Ippo enne angottu elpichal sangathi kushaal.
Ippo ammedaduthu pokanda... Namude oravasyam oru charchayum koodathe thalikalanjapol njan ente karachil samaravumai munottu pokan theerumanichu.

Ammooma aa samaram verum oru ladu vil othuki(Njan kozha vangi ennu ningal parayaruthu, Onnumillankilum oru nalla karayam nadakunna veedalle njanayittu enthina oru vasapisaku).

Enik enthenkilum kittiyalum athinte oru panku ente chechikya. Chechi ennu parayumbol Eswari chitta yude makal... Ene kalum rando moono vayasu kooduthal kannum.

Parayumbol Chechi enoke parayum pakse Najan ithu vare alvale chechi ennu villichittilla.
Angane chechikyum kitti oru ladu.
Aa ladu vine cholliyayirunnu randamathe karachil.
Njanum Chechiyum thamil adi sahajam. Athinu prethyekichu karanam onnum venda.
Aval valichu neetiyatha ente randu cheviyum ennu veetil parayunathu njan kettittundu.
Pakse enik ormayilla.
Oru Thiruvona divasam Njagal randu perum koodi thalukoodi, Oral vadakottum matteyal thekottum noki nilkunna oru photto ente kayil undu.

Athu kannu bol innu chirivarum.
Enik nallareethiyil thala vedanikunnu...
njan nirthuva... bakai pinne

3 comments:

Unknown said...

thanado malayalathile etavum number one story writer

സുമേഷ് സുധാകരൻ said...

Kollam bro

Unknown said...

Kollaaam.....nalla kadha...u know how to tell a clean story..